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Free verse № 77142

Gifts

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Dec 2003 · 2 comments

my passion awakened by Chris Martin's voice and the music in Gina Breedlove's smile, the light spiraling ecstatically downward. I gave you night and I gave you day with beauty no camera can photograph. on this endless and boundless journey with treasures and gifts of creativity gifts of mind travel and health inside. trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable, into the hearts and minds of past loves. permission the prerequisite for staying, but permission to leave is never necessary.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Dec-03/12:08 PM Reply
What?
[10] The_Third_Isis 19-Dec-03/11:54 AM Reply
Thank's for the advice, we all have our styles and I'am new at this, "Trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable," I write about that my Trips. mind, creativity,and a lot of passion,into your heart
if you allow it and the heart's of others. NO Permission to leave is the freedom that an aquarian soul like me needs to stay and express my "gifts"
of creativity.Thanks for putting your words out in the univerce..happy holidays.A 10

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