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Gifts (Free verse) by miraclemaker my passion awakened
by Chris Martin's voice
and the music in
Gina Breedlove's smile,
the light spiraling
ecstatically downward.
I gave you night
and I gave you day
with beauty no
camera can photograph.
on this endless
and boundless journey
with treasures and
gifts of creativity
gifts of mind travel
and health inside.
trips everywhere and
anywhere imaginable,
into the hearts and
minds of past loves.
permission the prerequisite
for staying,
but permission to leave
is never necessary.
Up the ladder:
The Poet's Plight
Down the ladder:
One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode
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Posted: December 5, 2003 9:36 AM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2003 9:36 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.3585887 Overall Rank: 3313 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54
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5-Dec-03/12:08 PM
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Thank's for the advice, we all have our styles and I'am new at this, "Trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable," I write about that my Trips. mind, creativity,and a lot of passion,into your heart
if you allow it and the heart's of others. NO Permission to leave is the freedom that an aquarian soul like me needs to stay and express my "gifts" of creativity.Thanks for putting your words out in the univerce..happy holidays.A 10 now 183 view(s)
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