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The Reason
(
Free verse
) by
frdup717
The reason that I haven't told you how I truly feel, is because when I'm around you, my mind is lost behind the wheel. My stomache fills with butterflies, when we meet eye to eye, I wish that you were here with me, I'm so lonely I could die.
Shuushin
31-Jul-04/7:37 PM
you aint sposed to vote on yer own stuff, FR!
Has a 50's lyrical quality to it, and despite the indentations and easy sentiment, I like it.
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