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The Reason (Free verse) by frdup717

The reason that I haven't told you how I truly feel, is because when I'm around you, my mind is lost behind the wheel. My stomache fills with butterflies, when we meet eye to eye, I wish that you were here with me, I'm so lonely I could die.

Shuushin 31-Jul-04/7:37 PM
you aint sposed to vote on yer own stuff, FR!

Has a 50's lyrical quality to it, and despite the indentations and easy sentiment, I like it.




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