Re: Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros	20-Sep-02/10:31 AM
what r u telling???
Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros	20-Sep-02/10:31 AM
how can u call such as poems plz spare us
Re: la petite mort by poetekzen	20-Jul-02/3:39 AM
its lust, not love... entire poem in a wrong way... i agree, its debatable... just my 2 paisas
Re: Angel by Mada	20-Jul-02/3:38 AM
too many of this kind
Re: none by Bakar	20-Jul-02/3:37 AM
???
Re: pinky swear by crin	20-Jul-02/3:37 AM
nice one
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama	20-Jul-02/3:36 AM
i didnt get a hand of it
Re: Compassion by Kashi	20-Jul-02/3:36 AM
u assume that war is wrong... but theres nothing called right or wrong here.... esp for angels!!!
Re: To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine	20-Jul-02/3:35 AM
more lucid plz
Re: Wejy by christian	20-Jul-02/3:33 AM
any point here?
Re: A poem from the sky by Roisin	20-Jul-02/3:31 AM
it a point
Re: An Undulation in Time by Monchichee	20-Jul-02/3:29 AM
there are so many of this type
Re: I like to run by T.Becquerel II	20-Jul-02/3:27 AM
dont think... put fuck not f**k, u r a poet, and i didnt like this
Re: The Spark by unknown	20-Jul-02/3:26 AM
nope, doesnt has the desired effect
Re: Internet Prisoner by avwiz71	20-Jul-02/3:26 AM
I didnt read this one... it constrains the meters and the rhymes
Re: post-burnout by jay_dace	20-Jul-02/3:25 AM
make it more exuberant!!!
Re: Casus Belli by unknown	20-Jul-02/3:24 AM
work on it more
Re: Billie's Threnody by Frass	20-Jul-02/3:23 AM
doesnt has the soul
Re: Missing You by xobrokendreamsox	20-Jul-02/3:21 AM
plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
Re: Searching... by kissmeufool58	20-Jul-02/3:19 AM
a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept