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Angel (Free verse) by Mada angel lodged in my mind
staring at cloudy ceiling
with eyes as blue as the sky above
and as deep as my heartbeat
radiant hair billowing in the wind
the mist entangling with her voice
giving me a sensation of heaven
making a smile spread across myself
and a light across my soul
no mere words of mine
can capture the spot in my heart
that is reserved only for her
for no one can make me sit
so late at night
and smile to myself
smiling to a picture of an angel
Up the ladder:
Hammered Nail
Down the ladder:
living room
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Posted: May 18, 2002 8:17 AM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2002 8:17 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.825604 Overall Rank: 13482 Comments:
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anonymous @ 137.205.8.4
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18-May-02/10:30 AM
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the mind bending awfulness of this drivel defies description
im sorry - but what's this meant to mean?
it's desperateness at it's best
This really is awful. I think if puked on a bit of paper it would make a better poem. What does it even mean? You should be banned from writing anything ever again.
a textual euphemism for utter shite.
too many of this kind
Enjoyed reading, it touched me.
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