Angel

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 May 2002 · 6 comments

angel lodged in my mind staring at cloudy ceiling with eyes as blue as the sky above and as deep as my heartbeat radiant hair billowing in the wind the mist entangling with her voice giving me a sensation of heaven making a smile spread across myself and a light across my soul no mere words of mine can capture the spot in my heart that is reserved only for her for no one can make me sit so late at night and smile to myself smiling to a picture of an angel

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[2] anonymous 18-May-02/10:30 AM Reply

the mind bending awfulness of this drivel defies description

[2] anonymous 18-May-02/12:12 PM Reply

im sorry - but what's this meant to mean?
it's desperateness at it's best

[2] anonymous 19-May-02/12:24 PM Reply

This really is awful. I think if puked on a bit of paper it would make a better poem. What does it even mean? You should be banned from writing anything ever again.

[2] anonymous 19-May-02/12:26 PM Reply

a textual euphemism for utter shite.

[2] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:38 AM Reply

too many of this kind

[10] Dancer 17-Mar-03/6:44 AM Reply

Enjoyed reading, it touched me.