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living room (Other) by elmundo
three floors up notion divine breathing shallow , not yet dead. solitary child football companion, a moment in time. burning down the house, why think this. sunday what a day.keyboard nightmare limitation, drowned in wine, no hope with this.salsa master closed on desert linen, merchants caravan towering pass, draped on couches' back. one is joined, all is air, all is air...no more thoughts.

Up the ladder: Angel
Down the ladder: destinys anguish

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3846154
Weighted score: 3.8190591
Overall Rank: 13478
Posted: May 19, 2002 10:21 AM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2002 10:21 AM PDT
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[7]... anonymous @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/10:51 AM | Reply
well you know what to do..

will this be reborn with brighter wings???
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.12 | 15-Jul-02/1:54 PM | Reply
blah.
[1] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/5:45 PM | Reply
Sounds more like the pantry.
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