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Angel (Free verse) by Mada

angel lodged in my mind staring at cloudy ceiling with eyes as blue as the sky above and as deep as my heartbeat radiant hair billowing in the wind the mist entangling with her voice giving me a sensation of heaven making a smile spread across myself and a light across my soul no mere words of mine can capture the spot in my heart that is reserved only for her for no one can make me sit so late at night and smile to myself smiling to a picture of an angel

anonymous 19-May-02/12:24 PM
This really is awful. I think if puked on a bit of paper it would make a better poem. What does it even mean? You should be banned from writing anything ever again.




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