on Casus Belli by unknown
20 Jul 2002, 3:24 AM
work on it more
on post-burnout by jay_dace
20 Jul 2002, 3:25 AM
make it more exuberant!!!
on Internet Prisoner by avwiz71
20 Jul 2002, 3:26 AM
I didnt read this one... it constrains the meters and the rhymes
on Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros
20 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
what r u telling???
on pinky swear by crin
20 Jul 2002, 3:37 AM
nice one
on A poem from the sky by Roisin
20 Jul 2002, 3:31 AM
it a point
on The Spark by unknown
20 Jul 2002, 3:26 AM
nope, doesnt has the desired effect
on I like to run by T.Becquerel II
20 Jul 2002, 3:27 AM
dont think... put fuck not f**k, u r a poet, and i didnt like this
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:28 AM
not convincing
on An Undulation in Time by Monchichee
20 Jul 2002, 3:29 AM
there are so many of this type
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:31 AM
ya, a punch required
on To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine
20 Jul 2002, 3:35 AM
more lucid plz
on la petite mort by poetekzen
20 Jul 2002, 3:39 AM
its lust, not love... entire poem in a wrong way... i agree, its debatable... just my 2 paisas
on Compassion by Kashi
20 Jul 2002, 3:36 AM
u assume that war is wrong... but theres nothing called right or wrong here.... esp for angels!!!
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
20 Jul 2002, 3:36 AM
i didnt get a hand of it
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 6:36 AM
well, whenever a person does think or wish to do extremes, he starts out energitically to get out of the routine.. but later, his true sadness or frustation shows up but he nevertheless exults in his sadness, since thats what he wanted to do in the first place.... my interpretation :)
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
20 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
how can u call such as poems
plz spare us
plz spare us