Re: Casus Belli by unknown	20-Jul-02/3:24 AM
work on it more
Re: post-burnout by jay_dace	20-Jul-02/3:25 AM
make it more exuberant!!!
Re: Internet Prisoner by avwiz71	20-Jul-02/3:26 AM
I didnt read this one... it constrains the meters and the rhymes
Re: The Spark by unknown	20-Jul-02/3:26 AM
nope, doesnt has the desired effect
Re: I like to run by T.Becquerel II	20-Jul-02/3:27 AM
dont think... put fuck not f**k, u r a poet, and i didnt like this
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-02/3:28 AM
not convincing
Re: An Undulation in Time by Monchichee	20-Jul-02/3:29 AM
there are so many of this type
Re: A poem from the sky by Roisin	20-Jul-02/3:31 AM
it a point
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-02/3:31 AM
ya, a punch required
Re: Wejy by christian	20-Jul-02/3:33 AM
any point here?
Re: To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine	20-Jul-02/3:35 AM
more lucid plz
Re: Compassion by Kashi	20-Jul-02/3:36 AM
u assume that war is wrong... but theres nothing called right or wrong here.... esp for angels!!!
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama	20-Jul-02/3:36 AM
i didnt get a hand of it
Re: pinky swear by crin	20-Jul-02/3:37 AM
nice one
Re: none by Bakar	20-Jul-02/3:37 AM
???
Re: Angel by Mada	20-Jul-02/3:38 AM
too many of this kind
Re: la petite mort by poetekzen	20-Jul-02/3:39 AM
its lust, not love... entire poem in a wrong way... i agree, its debatable... just my 2 paisas
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-02/6:36 AM
well, whenever a person does think or wish to do extremes, he starts out energitically to get out of the routine.. but later, his true sadness or frustation shows up but he nevertheless exults in his sadness, since thats what he wanted to do in the first place.... my interpretation :)
Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros	20-Sep-02/10:31 AM
how can u call such as poems plz spare us
Re: Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros	20-Sep-02/10:31 AM
what r u telling???