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pinky swear (Free verse) by crin
bone against bone please just take me home i don't believe that you could ever hurt me so i just close my eye and let you drive will your eyes wander will your hands will you stick to our plan this is strange yet comforting whatever this is that we have between us

Up the ladder: Call Someone Right Away
Down the ladder: To My Grandfather

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1666665
Overall Rank: 5060
Posted: June 30, 2002 10:26 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2002 10:26 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 9-Jul-02/2:55 PM | Reply
It's called the handbrake, my love. And to think you call yourself a car expert...
[n/a] crin @ | 10-Jul-02/12:58 AM | Reply
quite a clever little comment and witty also. congratulations, you've made me smile.
[6] dilips_10 @ 203.197.190.94 | 20-Jul-02/3:37 AM | Reply
nice one
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