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Free verse № 3159

pinky swear

Member since 2001 · Posted 30 Jun 2002 · 3 comments

bone against bone please just take me home i don't believe that you could ever hurt me so i just close my eye and let you drive will your eyes wander will your hands will you stick to our plan this is strange yet comforting whatever this is that we have between us

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3 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/2:55 PM Reply
It's called the handbrake, my love. And to think you call yourself a car expert...
[n/a] crin 10-Jul-02/12:58 AM Reply
quite a clever little comment and witty also. congratulations, you've made me smile.
[6] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:37 AM Reply
nice one