The Spark

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 May 2002 · 3 comments

I?ll float between them Ticking softly, bright fusion of eyes and smiles. The Spark That little molecule of potential joy Dancing in her glances And it's just so much fun to toy with the hope that it'll all happen. And that this light sprite, Gold and white, Just might

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[6] malakin 20-May-02/12:01 PM Reply

I like it, it's airy, it's free, it's sweet..

[2] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:26 AM Reply

nope, doesnt has the desired effect

[7] little_big_nose 4-Jan-04/5:56 PM Reply

kinda confusing, so it's pretty good