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The Spark (Free verse) by antoniojl
I?ll float between them Ticking softly, bright fusion of eyes and smiles. The Spark That little molecule of potential joy Dancing in her glances And it's just so much fun to toy with the hope that it'll all happen. And that this light sprite, Gold and white, Just might
Up the ladder: There she is!
Down the ladder: Stone
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6363635
Weighted score: 4.818182
Overall Rank: 10932
Posted: May 20, 2002 6:34 AM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 6:34 AM PDT
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[6] malakin @ 148.108.1.56 | 20-May-02/12:01 PM | Reply
I like it, it's airy, it's free, it's sweet..
[2] dilips_10 @ 203.197.190.94 | 20-Jul-02/3:26 AM | Reply
nope, doesnt has the desired effect
[7] little_big_nose @ 216.207.134.80 | 4-Jan-04/5:56 PM | Reply
kinda confusing, so it's pretty good
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