DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

faces unknown

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Aug 2004 · 4 comments

Lotting for love In the cold crossing of oceans Unseen, faces unknown on words of wait when by your side is destiny for the taking In flesh, not this keyingwords into the unknown For any, any so long in the otherland why look up to the mountains Stairring at stars your hands never can pluck pretty sight in blindness On this land already Is this hill the heal to your heart Not distance to dish distance

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.33 weighted 4.82 rank 10916 views 220 View voting details →

6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

A favorite of flames777.

4 comments

[0] nentwined 26-Aug-04/12:26 PM Reply

"stairring" is something I'd never contemplated before.

I really have _no idea_ how to read this. The words seem to strive for an entire lack of coherence.

[4] Dovina 26-Aug-04/1:17 PM Reply

I'm staring at stars and stairing up to pluck them, a pretty sight in my blindness. But my heart is healed by a hill on the land, so all is cool. ????

[6] Prince of Void 27-Aug-04/2:07 AM Reply

in my point of view i like this poem ..the theme is considerable ..that's good

[4] Dovina › Prince of Void 27-Aug-04/9:42 AM Reply

Please tell me what the considerable theme is, because I'm at a loss.