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faces unknown (Free verse) by daggatolar Lotting for love
In the cold crossing of oceans
Unseen, faces unknown on words of wait
when by your side is destiny for the taking
In flesh, not this keyingwords into the unknown
For any, any so long in the otherland
why look up to the mountains
Stairring at stars your hands never can pluck
pretty sight in blindness
On this land already
Is this hill the heal to your heart
Not distance to dish distance
Up the ladder:
Bookshop girls
Down the ladder:
blobby sums +-*/
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Posted: August 26, 2004 8:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2004 8:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10921 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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I'm staring at stars and stairing up to pluck them, a pretty sight in my blindness. But my heart is healed by a hill on the land, so all is cool. ????
in my point of view i like this poem ..the theme is considerable ..that's good
Please tell me what the considerable theme is, because I'm at a loss.
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I really have _no idea_ how to read this. The words seem to strive for an entire lack of coherence.