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faces unknown (Free verse) by daggatolar
Lotting for love In the cold crossing of oceans Unseen, faces unknown on words of wait when by your side is destiny for the taking In flesh, not this keyingwords into the unknown For any, any so long in the otherland why look up to the mountains Stairring at stars your hands never can pluck pretty sight in blindness On this land already Is this hill the heal to your heart Not distance to dish distance

Down the ladder: Why?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10863
Posted: August 26, 2004 8:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2004 8:58 AM PDT
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[0] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 26-Aug-04/12:26 PM | Reply
"stairring" is something I'd never contemplated before.

I really have _no idea_ how to read this. The words seem to strive for an entire lack of coherence.
[4] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 26-Aug-04/1:17 PM | Reply
I'm staring at stars and stairing up to pluck them, a pretty sight in my blindness. But my heart is healed by a hill on the land, so all is cool. ????
[6] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.144 | 27-Aug-04/2:07 AM | Reply
in my point of view i like this poem ..the theme is considerable ..that's good
[4] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > Prince of Void | 27-Aug-04/9:42 AM | Reply
Please tell me what the considerable theme is, because I'm at a loss.
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