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faces unknown (Free verse) by daggatolar

Lotting for love In the cold crossing of oceans Unseen, faces unknown on words of wait when by your side is destiny for the taking In flesh, not this keyingwords into the unknown For any, any so long in the otherland why look up to the mountains Stairring at stars your hands never can pluck pretty sight in blindness On this land already Is this hill the heal to your heart Not distance to dish distance

nentwined 26-Aug-04/12:26 PM
"stairring" is something I'd never contemplated before.

I really have _no idea_ how to read this. The words seem to strive for an entire lack of coherence.




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