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Stone (Lyric) by ErgoErgun
Only bitter stonework reflects The anthem of the disconsolate Marble's the moon of the heartbroken Absorbing light and reflecting dark - The fraud of decency But pillars oft rise to granite walls Supporting high societies on the drone of dissolute lulls, Granite's more coarse But offers a recourse - Feeling failure is easy when seeing yourself is not Of all Earth's quarry richness Coal is the best and simplest: No lies be told - You're as black as cold: But waiting a million years, With pressure from your peers, And you're something respectable

Up the ladder: The Spark
Down the ladder: My ode to "the artist"

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6363635
Weighted score: 4.818182
Overall Rank: 10933
Posted: July 4, 2002 2:04 PM PDT; Last modified: July 4, 2002 2:04 PM PDT
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[6] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 1-Aug-02/7:21 PM | Reply
almost there...carve a little deeper...polish it
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