on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:24 AM
doesnt has the intended "josh"
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:24 AM
doesnt has the intended "josh"
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 3:14 AM
still i dont know the reason.......
on My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky
30 Jun 2002, 3:16 AM
decent one
on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide
30 Jun 2002, 3:17 AM
nice reading the mind of the rat!
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 3:18 AM
there are so many of this type
on you are the bell and i am the dog by silvertongueddevil
30 Jun 2002, 3:19 AM
quite a view!
on Searching... by kissmeufool58
20 Jul 2002, 3:19 AM
a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept
on Missing You by xobrokendreamsox
20 Jul 2002, 3:21 AM
plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:22 AM
nope.... u have to write for us also, not only for urselves
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:23 AM
plz write for the readers too
on Billie's Threnody by Frass
20 Jul 2002, 3:23 AM
doesnt has the soul
on Untitled. by LucidRevelation
30 Jun 2002, 3:20 AM
nice one
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 3:21 AM
There r so many of this type
on Live My Death by Rich Clark
30 Jun 2002, 3:10 AM
the first and last lines are good, otherwise pretty expectable
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 3:11 AM
Nice play of words!!!
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 3:12 AM
nice idea, but could have been improved upon it
on [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz
30 Jun 2002, 3:22 AM
i lost out in the middle.. dont write for urself, think of the saleability of what u write
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 3:20 AM
????