| Re: Live My Death by Rich Clark |
30-Jun-02/3:10 AM |
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the first and last lines are good, otherwise pretty expectable
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30-Jun-02/3:11 AM |
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30-Jun-02/3:12 AM |
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nice idea, but could have been improved upon it
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30-Jun-02/3:14 AM |
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still i dont know the reason.......
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| Re: My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky |
30-Jun-02/3:16 AM |
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| Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide |
30-Jun-02/3:17 AM |
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nice reading the mind of the rat!
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30-Jun-02/3:18 AM |
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there are so many of this type
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| Re: you are the bell and i am the dog by silvertongueddevil |
30-Jun-02/3:19 AM |
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| Re: Untitled. by LucidRevelation |
30-Jun-02/3:20 AM |
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30-Jun-02/3:21 AM |
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There r so many of this type
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| Re: [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz |
30-Jun-02/3:22 AM |
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i lost out in the middle.. dont write for urself, think of the saleability of what u write
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| Re: Ahyuim by Modulo |
30-Jun-02/3:23 AM |
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| Re: Searching... by kissmeufool58 |
20-Jul-02/3:19 AM |
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a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept
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20-Jul-02/3:20 AM |
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| Re: Missing You by xobrokendreamsox |
20-Jul-02/3:21 AM |
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plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
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20-Jul-02/3:22 AM |
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nope.... u have to write for us also, not only for urselves
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20-Jul-02/3:23 AM |
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plz write for the readers too
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| Re: Billie's Threnody by Frass |
20-Jul-02/3:23 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Jul-02/3:24 AM |
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doesnt has the intended "josh"
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Jul-02/3:24 AM |
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doesnt has the intended "josh"
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