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My Heart's Not Built Like That (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky My heart does not pulsate,
Nor dance;
To anyone's tune.
Instead, it creates.
And sometimes,
It re-creates its own.
I can hear
The first faint strains
Of a symphony of
Melancholia;
Coming from its
Four heavy chambers.
And it is writing
A song for you,
It is waiting
To drown you;
In between
Peaks, and swells,
And fluid transcendence,
In the only way
My heart knows
How to beat.
Up the ladder:
So Shall I For You
Down the ladder:
Dear Ms. Sexton
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Posted: June 29, 2002 12:49 AM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2002 12:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4699664 Overall Rank: 2849 Comments:
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dilips_10 @ 203.197.190.98
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30-Jun-02/3:16 AM
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decent one
cool name.unique style.three act play.you do own the sky. <this vote brought to you by datura the true potion of invisibility, recomended by shamans world round, and zipless the pants that control your bladder> i love this piece i will hang it on my wall..it wins the horus8 PRIZE FOR HOW TO DO IT RIGHT WITH YOUR LEFT award for late night readers..killere
Lovely.
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