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My Heart's Not Built Like That (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky

My heart does not pulsate, Nor dance; To anyone's tune. Instead, it creates. And sometimes, It re-creates its own. I can hear The first faint strains Of a symphony of Melancholia; Coming from its Four heavy chambers. And it is writing A song for you, It is waiting To drown you; In between Peaks, and swells, And fluid transcendence, In the only way My heart knows How to beat.

horus8 14-Aug-02/12:35 AM
cool name.unique style.three act play.you do own the sky. <this vote brought to you by datura the true potion of invisibility, recomended by shamans world round, and zipless the pants that control your bladder> i love this piece i will hang it on my wall..it wins the horus8 PRIZE FOR HOW TO DO IT RIGHT WITH YOUR LEFT award for late night readers..killere




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