poemranker ::Missing You by xobrokendreamsox

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Free verse № 5423

Missing You

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

I stand alone in the memories we've had together, I shed a tear and knew it would last forever. I sit in the darkness with nothing to say, Hopefully tomorrow will be a better day. There weren't many times we were together, But i knew those times, they were better. I hope you know I love you, for I never got to say goodbye, I wish I were with you, please dont let me cry.

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[3] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:21 AM Reply
plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
[n/a] xobrokendreamsox 22-Jul-02/2:58 PM Reply
I really need a lot of help. I'm just beginning to take up writing. If you would like to help me, please reply back. I would greatly appreciate it