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Missing You (Free verse) by xobrokendreamsox
I stand alone in the memories we've had together, I shed a tear and knew it would last forever. I sit in the darkness with nothing to say, Hopefully tomorrow will be a better day. There weren't many times we were together, But i knew those times, they were better. I hope you know I love you, for I never got to say goodbye, I wish I were with you, please dont let me cry.

Up the ladder: Platonic Love
Down the ladder: In these boots

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6192
Posted: July 20, 2002 12:15 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2002 12:15 AM PDT
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[3] dilips_10 @ 203.197.190.94 | 20-Jul-02/3:21 AM | Reply
plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
[n/a] xobrokendreamsox @ | 22-Jul-02/2:58 PM | Reply
I really need a lot of help. I'm just beginning to take up writing. If you would like to help me, please reply back. I would greatly appreciate it
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