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Searching... (Free verse) by kissmeufool58 Shinning like a bright yellow star
In a place that seems so far
Always uncertain of what's up above
We keep searching for what were not certain of
Looking for more answers to our mysteries
We often find ourselves filled of with uncertainties.
Up the ladder:
Sonnet On Psyche
Down the ladder:
Full Fathom Five
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Posted: July 10, 2002 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 8:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9 Overall Rank: 9859 Comments:
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Twisted Wizard @ 66.157.72.236
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11-Jul-02/12:09 AM
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hey, thanx I didn't realize that there was more than one person on here that appreciated my writing. This poem is good in my view. I would say that if it could be made longer and with a little bit of editing it could be really good. Always remember that there is always room for improvement :)
a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept
it has a sweet nothing to it that makes it ring
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