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Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Shinning like a bright yellow star In a place that seems so far Always uncertain of what's up above We keep searching for what were not certain of Looking for more answers to our mysteries We often find ourselves filled of with uncertainties.

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[8] Twisted Wizard 11-Jul-02/12:09 AM Reply

hey, thanx I didn't realize that there was more than one person on here that appreciated my writing. This poem is good in my view. I would say that if it could be made longer and with a little bit of editing it could be really good. Always remember that there is always room for improvement :)

[4] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:19 AM Reply

a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept

[7] little_big_nose 4-Jan-04/5:50 PM Reply

it has a sweet nothing to it that makes it ring