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Searching... (Free verse) by kissmeufool58

Shinning like a bright yellow star In a place that seems so far Always uncertain of what's up above We keep searching for what were not certain of Looking for more answers to our mysteries We often find ourselves filled of with uncertainties.

Twisted Wizard 11-Jul-02/12:09 AM
hey, thanx I didn't realize that there was more than one person on here that appreciated my writing. This poem is good in my view. I would say that if it could be made longer and with a little bit of editing it could be really good. Always remember that there is always room for improvement :)




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