on Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros
20 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
what r u telling???
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
20 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
how can u call such as poems
plz spare us
plz spare us
on la petite mort by poetekzen
20 Jul 2002, 3:39 AM
its lust, not love... entire poem in a wrong way... i agree, its debatable... just my 2 paisas
on pinky swear by crin
20 Jul 2002, 3:37 AM
nice one
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
20 Jul 2002, 3:36 AM
i didnt get a hand of it
on Compassion by Kashi
20 Jul 2002, 3:36 AM
u assume that war is wrong... but theres nothing called right or wrong here.... esp for angels!!!
on To the Storm - A Final Prayer by Satine
20 Jul 2002, 3:35 AM
more lucid plz
on A poem from the sky by Roisin
20 Jul 2002, 3:31 AM
it a point
on An Undulation in Time by Monchichee
20 Jul 2002, 3:29 AM
there are so many of this type
on I like to run by T.Becquerel II
20 Jul 2002, 3:27 AM
dont think... put fuck not f**k, u r a poet, and i didnt like this
on The Spark by unknown
20 Jul 2002, 3:26 AM
nope, doesnt has the desired effect
on Internet Prisoner by avwiz71
20 Jul 2002, 3:26 AM
I didnt read this one... it constrains the meters and the rhymes
on post-burnout by jay_dace
20 Jul 2002, 3:25 AM
make it more exuberant!!!
on Casus Belli by unknown
20 Jul 2002, 3:24 AM
work on it more
on Billie's Threnody by Frass
20 Jul 2002, 3:23 AM
doesnt has the soul
on Missing You by xobrokendreamsox
20 Jul 2002, 3:21 AM
plz plz work more on this... got the heart but not the flow
on Searching... by kissmeufool58
20 Jul 2002, 3:19 AM
a tough concept u presented very vaguely.... plz work more on this beautiful concept