Re: Ahyuim by Modulo	30-Jun-02/3:23 AM
i didnt get it
Re: [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz	30-Jun-02/3:22 AM
i lost out in the middle.. dont write for urself, think of the saleability of what u write
Re: Untitled. by LucidRevelation	30-Jun-02/3:20 AM
nice one
Re: you are the bell and i am the dog by silvertongueddevil	30-Jun-02/3:19 AM
quite a view!
Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide	30-Jun-02/3:17 AM
nice reading the mind of the rat!
Re: My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky	30-Jun-02/3:16 AM
decent one
Re: Live My Death by Rich Clark	30-Jun-02/3:10 AM
the first and last lines are good, otherwise pretty expectable
Re: Something New by feelinglistless	30-Jun-02/3:07 AM
i can visualize that!!!
Re: Fragment by goldfish	13-May-02/9:34 PM
u have left things there itself. looks a bit bland, though it tries to be emotive.