poemranker ::Something New by feelinglistless

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Free verse № 1354

Something New

by feelinglistless

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

He reached out to touch her, nervously. Away, she pulled, from him, shielding. He spoke to her calmly. Screaming, her voice cracked. He smiled. She shouted. He ... She ... She reaches out to touch him, nervously. He holds out his hand and grips hers. She speaks to him calmly. Laughing, his voice cracks. She smiles. He weeps. She ... He ....

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[6] dilips_10 30-Jun-02/3:07 AM Reply
i can visualize that!!!
[6] Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:47 PM Reply
Too similar to others I have read.
[10] rosebud 7-Aug-02/12:10 PM Reply
This was a nice poem.