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Something New (Free verse) by feelinglistless

He reached out to touch her, nervously. Away, she pulled, from him, shielding. He spoke to her calmly. Screaming, her voice cracked. He smiled. She shouted. He ... She ... She reaches out to touch him, nervously. He holds out his hand and grips hers. She speaks to him calmly. Laughing, his voice cracks. She smiles. He weeps. She ... He ....

Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:47 PM
Too similar to others I have read.




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