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none (Free verse) by Bakar Twelve white horses
All in a row
Twelve white horses
Where will they all go
Twelve white horses
All in a wreck
Twelve white horses
Where is their broken neck
Up the ladder:
Their Eyes
Down the ladder:
Lonely World
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Posted: July 10, 2002 7:13 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 7:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7 Overall Rank: 12015 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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10-Jul-02/7:45 PM
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silly, but unpleasantly stilted.
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i like the word what you have writ/
they remind me of steamin horse shit. For an unprecedented 2nd time in one day I give the Doylum Big-pilo-shite award for excrament achivment in the field of verse to you Bakar. Well done my good sir. The prize is at this very moment sloshing its way to your door
Another poem conceived while sitting on the toilet in the fog of constipation, eh?
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