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Twelve white horses All in a row Twelve white horses Where will they all go Twelve white horses All in a wreck Twelve white horses Where is their broken neck

==Doylum 1-Aug-02/5:16 PM
i like the word what you have writ/
they remind me of steamin horse shit.
For an unprecedented 2nd time in one day I give the Doylum Big-pilo-shite award for excrament achivment in the field of verse to you Bakar. Well done my good sir. The prize is at this very moment sloshing its way to your door




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