poemranker ::Lonely World by rottweiler1982

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Lonely World

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

You sit alone, counting tears in the dark. Depressing emptiness inside your heart. You had your share, you see there's no doubt. It's up to you to find your own way out! It's a lonely world. Your envy, lusting for something you can't get. Hungry for her, you've dreamt of tasting her sweat. She's pretty, holding her would be sweet. Yeah, she's real damn easy, It's you dhe don't want to meet! It's a lonely world. She's hot yeah, standing in the moon light. Ready for anyone to make her feel alright. Loving makes her body feel so good. She gets what she comes for, like I knew she would.

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[5] <~> 16-Sep-02/7:09 AM Reply
you could get what you came for too, if'n you'd only stop crying alone in the dark, rotty
[2] horus8 20-Sep-02/12:42 AM Reply
lol! this geats the horus8 "pure talent award for late night poetry...you sir are no rottweiler you are a weiner dog with a crooked tail and a gas problem.
[5] Quarton 30-Nov-02/11:51 AM Reply
Needs some editing but the mood was engaging with a new twist added to an ages old theme.