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Their Eyes (Free verse) by venusdemilo I can only imagine
How one can feel in love
I see the look in one's eyes
When they can only see one.
I've never had the privilege
Of a restricted field of vision.
I only dream what mysteries it could hold.
Up the ladder:
Lost
Down the ladder:
none
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Posted: July 9, 2002 12:12 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 12:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7 Overall Rank: 12019 Comments:
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Angel_of_fait @ 209.33.154.135
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9-Jul-02/12:48 AM
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pretty good you headed in a good direction but ended up short angel_of_fait
It can be a bit overated. "find yourself and it will find you". I'm sorry, that sounded ridiculously pompous. Like something my fucking drunk Uncle would say. Forgive me . Maybe try traveling?
Wow, that's an original thought.
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