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Their Eyes (Free verse) by venusdemilo

I can only imagine How one can feel in love I see the look in one's eyes When they can only see one. I've never had the privilege Of a restricted field of vision. I only dream what mysteries it could hold.

horus8 15-Jul-02/12:03 AM
It can be a bit overated. "find yourself and it will find you". I'm sorry, that sounded ridiculously pompous. Like something my fucking drunk Uncle would say. Forgive me . Maybe try traveling?




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