Re: Grandma by Dovina	3-Nov-04/6:43 PM
I hear that arthritis is painful.
Re: a comment on An Even Better God by wilco	28-Oct-04/5:13 PM
Flimsy explanation: I've really just been too busy with the new job to get any writing done. Good enough? That said, remember that just because I haven't been posting doesn't necessarily man I havn't been on the ranker.
Re: Who is deserving of all my love by zodiac	27-Oct-04/7:49 PM
I'm glad to see you writing again. I wish you'd spend as much time writing as you do attempting to make Poemranker newbies feel bad about themselves. You're not half bad, is what I'm trying to say.
Re: Feast On Me by cuddlytiger17	10-Oct-04/7:26 PM
If this were free verse I'd probably give it a 4 but since you called it a pimple I'll give you a 7.
Re: Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper	10-Oct-04/7:18 PM
Seems to be about an abusive father. Not bad. I would maybe change this "How dare you say that I've done anything wrong in my life." , but otherwise, not bad at all.
Re: a comment on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco	4-Oct-04/8:02 PM
I seem to have had a brain fart there.
Re: Many Thanks by Dovina	29-Sep-04/7:45 PM
I was wondering where you've been.
Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	29-Sep-04/7:32 PM
Ryan Adams is one of my current favoritesalong with Matthew Ryan, Bobby Bare Jr., and the new Death Cab fo Cutie.
Re: A Choice by Dovina	13-Sep-04/7:41 PM
I rather like "They make me glad". Pure simplicity. Thats the way I like it.
Re: Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali	13-Sep-04/7:32 PM
Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.
Re: Grandpa's boat by Caducus	13-Sep-04/7:28 PM
I like it.
Re: Solitude by Dovina	13-Sep-04/7:24 PM
A spiral in phi? I like the sentiment behind it, but I'm just not feelin' this one D.
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	8-Sep-04/6:49 PM
The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is. In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
Re: Edges by Blue Magpie	8-Sep-04/6:33 PM
Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.
Re: a comment on Hoodwinked by Dovina	2-Sep-04/8:09 PM
My feeling is that men are stupid and women are insane. Makes for a volatile combination. And, yes, I think bow'ls is perfect.
Re: Heart by Shardik	2-Sep-04/8:05 PM
very old-school.
Re: a comment on Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	2-Sep-04/8:03 PM
Now Dovina, the Poemeranker will not be held hostile. We're going to have to conduct a crusade.
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	2-Sep-04/8:02 PM
So true.
Re: happy birthday by rnsbreeze	2-Sep-04/7:59 PM
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..
Re: How many? by rnsbreeze	2-Sep-04/7:58 PM
...roads must a man walk down, before you can call him a man? ...licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?