on Grandma by Dovina
3 Nov 2004, 6:43 PM
I hear that arthritis is painful.
replying on An Even Better God by wilco
28 Oct 2004, 5:13 PM
Flimsy explanation: I've really just been too busy with the new job to get any writing done. Good enough?
That said, remember that just because I haven't been posting doesn't necessarily man I havn't been on the ranker.
That said, remember that just because I haven't been posting doesn't necessarily man I havn't been on the ranker.
on Who is deserving of all my love by zodiac
27 Oct 2004, 7:49 PM
I'm glad to see you writing again. I wish you'd spend as much time writing as you do attempting to make Poemranker newbies feel bad about themselves. You're not half bad, is what I'm trying to say.
on Feast On Me by cuddlytiger17
10 Oct 2004, 7:26 PM
If this were free verse I'd probably give it a 4 but since you called it a pimple I'll give you a 7.
on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper
10 Oct 2004, 7:18 PM
Seems to be about an abusive father. Not bad. I would maybe change this "How dare you say that I've
done anything wrong in my life." , but otherwise, not bad at all.
done anything wrong in my life." , but otherwise, not bad at all.
replying on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco
4 Oct 2004, 8:02 PM
I seem to have had a brain fart there.
on Many Thanks by Dovina
29 Sep 2004, 7:45 PM
I was wondering where you've been.
replying on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco
29 Sep 2004, 7:32 PM
Ryan Adams is one of my current favoritesalong with Matthew Ryan, Bobby Bare Jr., and the new Death Cab fo Cutie.
on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali
13 Sep 2004, 7:32 PM
Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.
on Grandpa's boat by Caducus
13 Sep 2004, 7:28 PM
I like it.
on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry
8 Sep 2004, 6:49 PM
The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is.
In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
on Edges by Blue Magpie
8 Sep 2004, 6:33 PM
Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.
replying on Hoodwinked by Dovina
2 Sep 2004, 8:09 PM
My feeling is that men are stupid and women are insane. Makes for a volatile combination. And, yes, I think bow'ls is perfect.
replying on Down With Ingenuity by Dovina
2 Sep 2004, 8:03 PM
Now Dovina, the Poemeranker will not be held hostile. We're going to have to conduct a crusade.
on Down With Ingenuity by Dovina
2 Sep 2004, 8:02 PM
So true.
on happy birthday by rnsbreeze
2 Sep 2004, 7:59 PM
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..