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Old Man (Free verse) by Rollsoftoiletpaper
Old Man, Old Man. Where has the time gone?
I remember, I once feared you.
When you came in the night with your hand
held up high. I shut my eyes and loved you.
Old Man, Old Man. Where has your shield gone?
I remember, I once hurt too. When you told me
your lies and made us all cry. I shut my eyes
and loved you.
Old Man, Old Man. How dare you say that I've
done anything wrong in my life.
I know you don't care about the ring that you wear and still, Old Man, I
love you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2947
Posted: October 9, 2004 7:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2004 7:46 AM PDT
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