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Your Embrace (Other) by Brandy_n_Cali
The echo of the thunder.
The sweet thought of you above with me lying under.
Come In
Close The Door
Turn Off The Light
Chills caused by your embrace. My heart jumped into an unfamilar pace.
I undress you as I lay down. I start my kissing your lips, which leads
me down to your hips.
Pleasure given to him by my hand. The moan from his mouth, the clench
of my hand. His pleasure the only sound.
Running my fingers through your hair. As you whisper the things you
want to do in my ear.
I want to do this, just because I know it isn't right.
Protection rolled over him and placed into me.
Pain turns to pleasure, heat smothers the room. Sweat beads roll down
his neck.
My nails dig in his back.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6274
Posted: September 12, 2004 3:42 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2004 3:42 PM PDT
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but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?