| Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
3-Feb-03/10:43 PM |
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wow, you should work for the army. you'd make a fine recruiter...
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| Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz |
3-Feb-03/10:46 PM |
you seem to have a talent for exposing the dramatically depressing side of american history...about damn time.
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| Re: Eternity by Jigg |
3-Feb-03/10:52 PM |
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first 6 lines read quickly, but from there it seems to slack off. understandable. you probably had a few good lines you wanted to work with and then had to force the rest out to finish. if not, i do that a lot, so i'll just go back to being alone with my stuffed animals
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| Re: The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
3-Feb-03/10:53 PM |
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you recieve a 5, but only because of priest holmes. i like the chiefs.
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| Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Feb-03/2:36 PM |
lrig a mi eehet ekil
like tehee i'm a girl...sadly though, no stereotypical valley girl in middle school or high school EVER seemed to figure it out. what good is genius if no one understands it?
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| Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum |
4-Feb-03/2:43 PM |
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most notable correction i have to make is to change 'coal' to 'lead', for i'm sure it was a reference to the alchemy in the stanza before it, and alchemy was originally the science of changing lead to gold. i'll leave any other errors to the ranking public
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| Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer |
4-Feb-03/2:50 PM |
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i didn't even realize that these were all seperate haikus...i should really start paying attention to...eh, huh?
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| Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar |
5-Feb-03/2:44 AM |
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my ass hurts from reading all these comments...thank god i don't have a life.
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| Re: The poemranker desk by lunar |
5-Feb-03/2:49 AM |
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time and effort...also seems to have successfully brought out all the stars. good job moon.
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
5-Feb-03/3:09 PM |
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i am almost convinced that PAKI invented teen14 to praise this poem after saying no one over 16 would....hmm. mystery.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Feb-03/4:49 PM |
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how many times can someone say "beautiful". seriously, your testing my limits...
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| Re: A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Feb-03/6:31 AM |
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see, my personal fear would be to sign over my work only to later here it coming from the voice of the latest bubblegum-popper. i would then carbomb the building they were in...
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| Re: The Dark one's 2000th comment by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Feb-03/6:33 AM |
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i usually laugh AFTER breaking wind.
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| Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Feb-03/6:35 AM |
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snake bite eh? don't make me suck out anything...
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| Re: Star Bright by x311 |
6-Feb-03/6:38 AM |
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make a good song...nice kinda feel to it.
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| Re: The cross roads by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Feb-03/6:42 AM |
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i always meet the strangest people at the fair. families with no forking...creepy hairy things too.
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| Re: **The Therapist** by scitz |
6-Feb-03/6:46 AM |
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very nice, except i'll fight you about the moral of the story. feelings should not and are utterly impossible to keep locked up or secret. they project from you in every way and from every orifice...unless you have none. remember, a blocked pipe will explode from the pressure.
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| Re: throw-away by mindsigns |
6-Feb-03/6:48 AM |
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don't forget that ugly lamp from 1972. i don't even think it has a switch on it...
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| Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer |
6-Feb-03/6:49 AM |
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phoenix...favorite bird. the only one i know that won't shit on my car. here, have a 9.
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/2:07 PM |
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i usually watch shows about animals when my head won't let me sleep...but then again, i'm not what you'd call "all there"
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