| Re: Poem Written on a Ketchup Stained Paper Plate by woodstock20000 |
14-Feb-05/3:18 AM |
short, sweet, and 57 times to the point.
apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.
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| Re: Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry |
13-Feb-05/1:26 AM |
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i commend anyone anti-moore. i may not like Bush, but as an inspiring film maker you have to hate a jackass who puts himself into others peoples stories.
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| Re: Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic |
13-Feb-05/1:24 AM |
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i like the first stanze, but it is all a little too random for me...though i admit to being just as random.
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| Re: a comment on Haiku: The Legend Continues by brazen |
20-Jun-03/8:28 AM |
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| Re: a comment on time weights by brazen |
23-May-03/1:58 AM |
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but it is a step above polish glow-in-the-dark sundials
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| Re: a comment on time weights by brazen |
23-May-03/1:10 AM |
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hmm...seems you are quite right in that fact. the point i was aiming for was for "deeds undone" to reflect the past and "tasks left at hand" to reflect the future, but it is a bit to vague. i'm still working on it, so i'll try and tighten that confusion up next.
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| Re: Scurvey by horus8 |
11-May-03/12:55 AM |
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man, its like prom all over again...at least, the scurveys anyway
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| Re: a comment on all is yet to come (version 2) by brazen |
10-May-03/12:42 AM |
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explain harsh, because i'm guessing you mean harsh as in "brash" and "unpoetic", though you've previously stated it as being "mean". i just need the clarity for perfection
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| Re: a comment on all is yet to come (version 2) by brazen |
6-May-03/10:17 PM |
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its ok...save the criticism for when i'm done. i was trying to finish it before i passed out on the keyboard but couldn't quite make it, and my laziness prompted me to submit instead of open notepad and save it. i'll try and finish it within the next couple days
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| Re: a comment on moments lost in adversity by brazen |
29-Apr-03/10:40 PM |
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...of course meaning the whole religion thing...not me being an idiot.
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| Re: a comment on moments lost in adversity by brazen |
29-Apr-03/10:39 PM |
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and today we celebrate yet another genuine moment of hitting a nail directly on its head...congratulations, friend.
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| Re: a comment on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
29-Apr-03/10:37 PM |
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its ok...you just finished the line that i was actually quoting from the movie...which one is worse is up to reality to decide.
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| Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
28-Apr-03/11:16 PM |
Clatu Verata N... N... it's an 'N' word. N... N... It's definitely an "N" word!
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| Re: The Adulterous by Caducus |
1-Apr-03/8:39 AM |
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we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.
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| Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
12-Feb-03/5:03 AM |
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| Re: My suicide note was short and sweet by horus8 |
12-Feb-03/4:30 AM |
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too bad all i had was an extension cord left over from finally taking down my christmas lights
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| Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8 |
12-Feb-03/4:28 AM |
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unfortunately due to salary cap restrictions, the cather was traded to the corn. i'd like to say thank you to all those fans out that stuck with me and wish me luck with me new team...
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| Re: a comment on Starving at Tiffany's by horus8 |
12-Feb-03/4:27 AM |
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damn you...even just reading those 4 lines managed to get the song stuck in my head for longer then i would have liked...goddamn it.
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| Re: a comment on 42 by brazen |
11-Feb-03/11:43 PM |
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/2:07 PM |
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i usually watch shows about animals when my head won't let me sleep...but then again, i'm not what you'd call "all there"
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