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regarding some deleted poem... 10-Feb-03/2:51 PM
i love the imagery in this. it can say one thing and mean so many others...i need a brownie.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Feb-03/3:00 PM
i agree with the hand of tan on this poem...it could be better abbreviated.

persoanl preference...try to think of different way to say "slashed my wrists"...like Manson in 'the fight song' with "they'll just cut our wrists like cheap coupons and say that death was on sale today"...just, or course, not stolen like that. that was a reference.
Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8 12-Feb-03/4:28 AM
unfortunately due to salary cap restrictions, the cather was traded to the corn. i'd like to say thank you to all those fans out that stuck with me and wish me luck with me new team...
Re: My suicide note was short and sweet by horus8 12-Feb-03/4:30 AM
too bad all i had was an extension cord left over from finally taking down my christmas lights
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Feb-03/4:38 AM
cliche
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Feb-03/4:39 AM
hearts clot. brains grow senial. tough choice.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Feb-03/4:45 AM
sex sells for about $100 per hand job...least thats what i start at.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Feb-03/4:50 AM
"So all I do is cry now,
For I belong to a hell called yesterday."

now that is the best thing I'VE read all day
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Feb-03/5:01 AM
i would change the title before you get fucked with by many a different ranker...oh, and maybe destroy the poem before they see it as well.
Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin 12-Feb-03/5:03 AM
golly, mister
Re: The Adulterous by Caducus 1-Apr-03/8:39 AM
we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.
regarding some deleted poem... 13-Apr-03/12:24 AM
i bought my tickets online, so i didn't get to use the student discount...how screwed up life is
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin 28-Apr-03/11:16 PM
Clatu Verata N... N... it's an 'N' word. N... N... It's definitely an "N" word!
regarding some deleted poem... 2-May-03/12:55 AM
there has never been a better sentiment to death as this

"all i do is cry now
for i belong to a hell called yesterday"

magical in its depressing glory.
Re: Scurvey by horus8 11-May-03/12:55 AM
man, its like prom all over again...at least, the scurveys anyway
regarding some deleted poem... 23-May-03/12:48 AM
you're an animal...WHEW!! personally i prefer chains, to but each there own
Re: Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic 13-Feb-05/1:24 AM
i like the first stanze, but it is all a little too random for me...though i admit to being just as random.
Re: Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry 13-Feb-05/1:26 AM
i commend anyone anti-moore. i may not like Bush, but as an inspiring film maker you have to hate a jackass who puts himself into others peoples stories.
Re: Poem Written on a Ketchup Stained Paper Plate by woodstock20000 14-Feb-05/3:18 AM
short, sweet, and 57 times to the point.

apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Feb-05/3:22 AM
someone out there is so vain that i bet they think this poem is about them.


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