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Scurvey (Haiku) by horus8
Alas! Me hardy! Draw for plank or scuttlebutt. "Short straw!" squawks his bird. "Quiet your foul beak!" The Captain eye balls his crew. Gang rape mutiny.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.866667
Weighted score: 6.6441545
Overall Rank: 563
Posted: May 10, 2003 2:47 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2003 2:47 PM PDT
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[9] brazen @ 68.81.184.56 | 11-May-03/12:55 AM | Reply
man, its like prom all over again...at least, the scurveys anyway
[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/10:58 AM | Reply
rape?
[0] Joi @ 207.119.185.153 | 26-Aug-07/11:58 PM | Reply
I didn't care for your wording in this one. Keep trying different styles.
[0] Joi @ 207.119.185.153 | 27-Aug-07/12:00 AM | Reply
Not good in my opinion.
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