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Scurvey (Haiku) by horus8

Alas! Me hardy! Draw for plank or scuttlebutt. "Short straw!" squawks his bird. "Quiet your foul beak!" The Captain eye balls his crew. Gang rape mutiny.

Joi 26-Aug-07/11:58 PM
I didn't care for your wording in this one. Keep trying different styles.




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