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Haiku: The Legend Continues (Haiku) by brazen
I yearn for your love Because your so Angelic Heaven has lost one Lonely in the dark Surrounded by caring light Means happiness rules Friends always there Showing you are not alone With shoulders for tears Mind preoccupied With feelings of loniless I yearn for your love

Up the ladder: Love Cuts
Down the ladder: not full

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Weighted score: 4.686235
Overall Rank: 12079
Posted: August 28, 2002 12:14 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2002 12:14 PM PDT
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[6] Shin-Bojangles @ 207.179.152.37 | 28-Aug-02/10:18 PM | Reply
Needs more David CARE-ID-EE. What? I don't know how to spell it.
[1] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.71.126 | 20-Jun-03/5:38 AM | Reply
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[n/a] brazen @ 68.81.184.56 > Robert K Foster | 20-Jun-03/8:28 AM | Reply
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