| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
15-Nov-02/4:39 AM |
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This putrid pile of festering bile should never have seen the light of day. 0. Add to the equation that if you feel that making friends with an illiterate deserves "poetic" tribute, I conclude that you are one lonely bitch, in addition to being an appalling poet. I bid you good day.
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| Re: Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin |
8-Nov-02/7:59 AM |
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An unfortunate error of judgement, but a decent haiku. 7.
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| Re: a comment on Two Towers by Tascobar |
8-Nov-02/7:39 AM |
No, what is amazing is your clear lack of intellect. Tell me, can you feed yourself?
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| Re: Die by little_angel_maria |
7-Nov-02/8:27 AM |
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The poem gets an 8. Sadly, you get a 0, as I have read a poem bizarrely similar to this before. Sorry, but no points for plagiarism!!!!
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| Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
7-Nov-02/5:42 AM |
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Someone get this man a dictionary - please. And grammar tuition would also not go amiss.
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| Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria |
7-Nov-02/5:39 AM |
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One of your better efforts. 3.
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| Re: I remenber by little_angel_maria |
7-Nov-02/5:16 AM |
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Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
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| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
30-Oct-02/3:33 AM |
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A truthful account of many, many mornings. 7. I shall assume that most of the "low voters" are female.
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| Re: Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus |
30-Oct-02/3:22 AM |
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A good effort. 7. Can't fault any kind of tribute to the late great Jeff Buckley. Bravo!
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| Re: The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit |
29-Oct-02/8:44 AM |
Sorry, I'm a purist. Not a bad poem in itself, but an abhorrent haiku. Have a 0 and learn to OBEY THE RULES!!!!!!!
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| Re: Beer by Yardbird |
29-Oct-02/8:43 AM |
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| Re: Missing You by psychedelic |
28-Oct-02/4:21 AM |
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I don't think the last line works, unfortunately. Would have been a good haiku otherwise. Ho hum, such is life..... 4.
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| Re: wax by New Life Drug |
28-Oct-02/4:20 AM |
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Strange - this doesn't make any kind of sense whatsoever. Would indeed be better for the loss of the last line. 3.
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| Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 |
24-Oct-02/4:32 AM |
Not what I expected from the (misspelt) title, but a well pieced haiku nevertheless. Take this 7, and use it well.
And yes, I am a pedant.
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| Re: glue by chinstrap |
23-Oct-02/8:26 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar |
23-Oct-02/3:28 AM |
Yep, you're right. Should have been "That sweet, sweet poontang".
Still, I think the point gets across adequately
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| Re: a comment on Devotion by Tyriana |
22-Oct-02/10:07 AM |
Erm....I fail to see how my earlier comment could possibly be constued as rude?
And I stick by my comments. Like it or lump it.
Having said that, looking at my own ratings it appears that you've chosen to lump it....
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| Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Oct-02/10:04 AM |
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Point taken, DA - but I was speaking in general terms. This site has so many Yanks on that I'm beginning to forget what irony is. Ho hum.
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| Re: a comment on Devotion by Tyriana |
16-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
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That's what I like - mature, educated responses to constructive criticism.
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| Re: Devotion by Tyriana |
16-Oct-02/4:35 AM |
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Hmmm. Not bad, although it's already been done several thousand times before. This would be far better if more emotion was evoked - not easy, but that's what makes a great haiku. Have a 4.
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