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Necromantic Boo-boo (Haiku) by razorgrin
Zombies run amok. Perhaps I should have planned more. Oh well, live and learn.

Down the ladder: Perversions 3: Payback

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.7777777
Weighted score: 5.740891
Overall Rank: 1818
Posted: November 7, 2002 2:48 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2002 2:48 PM PST
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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Nov-02/3:01 PM | Reply
what did you think of that movie the ring? i mean it's not quite dario argento or dawn of the dead or anything, but in its own way. i thought it was unique and disturbing..that movie fucked my head up a bit..i had migrains and nightmares, and i'm a horror movie nut..it really effected my subconscious in odd ways to say the least...creepy. indeed. 8.h
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.45 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 7-Nov-02/3:04 PM | Reply
I love horror movies. i have yet to see the ring, though. time for class. Death & Dying (religious studies 2137). it's cold and dark.
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > razorgrin | 7-Nov-02/3:23 PM | Reply
you're funny. have fun.
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.134.94 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 8-Nov-02/12:45 AM | Reply
From the time they first allow the audience to watch the video clear through, and that firey tree! I was in a cold sweat. The imagery. Haunting in the way I discovered occult books in the library and then started having visions. I had to pray for 2 nights in a row inorder to fall asleep. And the Horse, that Black Nightmare, and his blood and the girl's screaming. Some of the best cinematography ever in the genre. Apparently Razorgrin makes out to the end alive, oh well. I'm more the martyr. Leading them out into the open field so the B-2 can get a clear shot. I'm such a ham.
[7] Tintagiles @ 207.179.173.41 | 7-Nov-02/7:59 PM | Reply
Your friends run amok too. You and your insane social circle. Let us hope the zombies hold their liquor as well as your friends. I somehow suspect they're all going to visit the liquor store. Remind them that the Scotch is mine, please.
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 8-Nov-02/1:18 AM | Reply
You goddam voodoo types and your lack of foresight. Always check with your local augury reader first.
[7] Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54 | 8-Nov-02/7:59 AM | Reply
An unfortunate error of judgement, but a decent haiku. 7.
[8] Frass @ 66.160.116.193 | 8-Nov-02/11:50 AM | Reply
"live and learn"...or die and dine; your choice, rzrgrn. I think it's hard to beat "Freaks" (1933?) for sheer skin-crawling revulsion inducement.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.44 > Frass | 8-Nov-02/12:20 PM | Reply
If I did raise the dead, I would probably just let them roam, but not before naming them. Schnookums, Foofkins, etc.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Frass | 8-Nov-02/12:25 PM | Reply
also a splendid flick by 'todd browning'(also was the first director to do dracula and the man who wasn't there with lon channey which is also a great flick))..who saw his friends head ripped off by a pipe truck on the 10 freeway when it was still a dirt road from l.a to santa monica...he used real freaks of course in the film(including the cone heads which constantly shit there pants on set) and the scene where the de-limbed torso is rolling around then goes up onto that table to light a smoke is fucking mind boggling...cheers!
[5] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.38 | 4-Dec-02/7:21 AM | Reply
This is above all my learning. When are finals over so your friend will come back. I lost her e-mail!
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.52 > poetandknowit | 4-Dec-02/12:40 PM | Reply
in a while. what, don't you miss me?
[5] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.38 > razorgrin | 4-Dec-02/1:08 PM | Reply
You still find the time to show up. Are the others (Tint and Limonade)cramming and you are truly a wizard.
[10] limonade @ 198.164.250.111 > poetandknowit | 4-Dec-02/4:09 PM | Reply
I don't cram. I do, however, hold myself to a reasonably high standard in essay writing. Which is what I'm doing: nailing together a pile of literary criticism. E-mail here: beatrice@splah.net
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.13 > poetandknowit | 5-Dec-02/12:36 PM | Reply
I have been spending my time productively writing essays and reviews as well as a couple of experiment designs. that said, all work and no heckling makes razorgrin even more cranky.
[10] Spider-Man @ 80.1.9.156 | 19-Jan-03/9:44 AM | Reply
Wowzers! Mighty tasty jerky you cook there, partner! Here's a 10, 'cuz it's Christmas!!!
[0] sk8boardandpoems @ 24.167.109.182 | 25-Feb-03/3:48 PM | Reply
boo boo is what all your work is
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.128 > sk8boardandpoems | 26-Feb-03/7:00 AM | Reply
You're running out of ideas and it shows, jew-killer.
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