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I remenber (Free verse) by little_angel_maria
I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday, I thought I'f found the best of friend in the world her name was Alejandra, though I was wrong, I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday when I first met Logan on my 15th birthday, the first time I saw him the butterflies in my tummy at the end of the party how he gave me a little peck in the mouth, I knew he liked me too, although I couldn't help but wonder how could someone as handsome as him be interested in me, I remenber it seems like it was yesterday, when me and Alejandra went to Jacob beach, the day i realised we were no longer close, the day i realised that i wasn't a child anymore, the day i realised i had to mature. I remenber it seems like it was yesterday, when I first met Kermit when i went to Alejandra's house, I thought I was in love with him, but I was wrong, I love Logan more than life itself. I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday, when I first went back to Costa Rica and started school there, when I met Jose daniel (tito) and when we first kissed,i remenber my tears when he broke up with me for melissa, I remenber hitting him and yelling at him about how could he do this to me. I remenber my life changed from happy to sad the day my best friend betrayed me and her father abused me oh how I remenber, but what I remenber the most is Logan turning my life from sad to happy. I remenber the day I discovered I have the best parents in the world when i was having an epilepsy attack, I thought i would die, but they were there for me telling me how much they loved me. I remenber my dad and how many times he tells me he holves me oh how i love my dad. He tells me he won't leave me again, let's just hope he keeps his words. Past is behind me hello to future included with the people i love the most and Logan by my side and alot of studying done.:)

Up the ladder: Afraid Of You (To Amber)
Down the ladder: Missing Yesterday

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.193176
Overall Rank: 13239
Posted: October 28, 2002 10:58 AM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 10:58 AM PST
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[0] Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54 | 7-Nov-02/5:16 AM | Reply
Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.52 | 7-Nov-02/11:48 AM | Reply
oh lord Jesu, please deliver us from this plague of craptacular poemes.....amen. p.s. Maria, when you were holving, did you use the zesty Italian dressing or vaseline?0.
[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.100 | 7-Nov-02/11:51 AM | Reply
So, you realised you had to mature. Dare I ask why you decided not to?
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jan-03/11:55 PM | Reply
ha ha EWhojoyhhyggifv. the an epilepsy attack holy shit, to fucking funny, i'll remenber this...10! this is the best worst written poem of all... YOU GET THE BIRD LEGGED HUT OF CONSTANT EMOTIONAL EMOTION WITH NO MOTION" AWARD IN AHHHH not swallowing your tongue? sure why not. 10!
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