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I remenber (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday, I thought I'f found the best of friend in the world her name was Alejandra, though I was wrong, I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday when I first met Logan on my 15th birthday, the first time I saw him the butterflies in my tummy at the end of the party how he gave me a little peck in the mouth, I knew he liked me too, although I couldn't help but wonder how could someone as handsome as him be interested in me, I remenber it seems like it was yesterday, when me and Alejandra went to Jacob beach, the day i realised we were no longer close, the day i realised that i wasn't a child anymore, the day i realised i had to mature. I remenber it seems like it was yesterday, when I first met Kermit when i went to Alejandra's house, I thought I was in love with him, but I was wrong, I love Logan more than life itself. I remenber it seems like it was only yesterday, when I first went back to Costa Rica and started school there, when I met Jose daniel (tito) and when we first kissed,i remenber my tears when he broke up with me for melissa, I remenber hitting him and yelling at him about how could he do this to me. I remenber my life changed from happy to sad the day my best friend betrayed me and her father abused me oh how I remenber, but what I remenber the most is Logan turning my life from sad to happy. I remenber the day I discovered I have the best parents in the world when i was having an epilepsy attack, I thought i would die, but they were there for me telling me how much they loved me. I remenber my dad and how many times he tells me he holves me oh how i love my dad. He tells me he won't leave me again, let's just hope he keeps his words. Past is behind me hello to future included with the people i love the most and Logan by my side and alot of studying done.:)

Tintagiles 7-Nov-02/11:51 AM
So, you realised you had to mature. Dare I ask why you decided not to?




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