| Re: Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/11:06 AM |
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| Re: Today's Spam by nentwined |
26-Feb-06/11:03 AM |
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Not the best, but entertaining. *7*
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| Re: My Shattered Love by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/11:01 AM |
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I just don't know, this is better than your other post, but the adj's seem extremely forced and the scheme is too formulaic. It makes you isolate and search for rhyme. *6*
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| Re: Into the Shadows I Crawl by Silverjackel |
26-Feb-06/10:58 AM |
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Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
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| Re: An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta |
26-Feb-06/10:53 AM |
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This is okay, a bit roundabout, I liked the Love of God theme and the ending. Could've been better *7*
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| Re: a comment on Iron Sky by MacFrantic |
23-Feb-06/1:42 PM |
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Actually, I was refering to satirist Neal Pollack. The lack of commas is intentional. Also, "burden of her foil" is taken in a figurative sense, hence her cursing the sky.
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| Re: lost souls by aamir_trichy |
21-Feb-06/6:30 AM |
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Ugh, this caves in fast. *4*
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| Re: Sunday i will dream again by Caducus |
21-Feb-06/6:28 AM |
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This is very satisfying, but a few of the adj's seem forced. A I wish I could give you a 9.5, because with a couple tweaks this is an 11 for me. *9*
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| Re: a comment on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before |
21-Feb-06/6:24 AM |
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Agreed with Ranger, and there are still a few things that irk me. Maybe get rid of the "it" in "I cannot watch..." Great flow though. *7*
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| Re: writer's block by Zoetrope |
10-Feb-06/3:52 PM |
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Impressive, in a word. *10*
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| Re: The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic |
10-Feb-06/3:47 PM |
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oops, *they're*, goddamn it
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| Re: a comment on The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic |
10-Feb-06/6:59 AM |
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Their not real, and thank you.
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| Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
28-Jan-06/2:07 AM |
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| Re: Jailbird by zodiac |
17-Jan-06/11:00 PM |
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Oh, if only I could express how great this truly is. *11*
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| Re: My Reason by PoeticXTC |
17-Jan-06/10:57 PM |
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This could have been much better, still, *7*
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| Re: Spinning, reeling by ecargo |
17-Jan-06/10:51 PM |
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Hah, this is pretty damn good, and I don't care at all about what you have to say. *9*
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| Re: Pain, I Curse Thee by woodstock20000 |
17-Jan-06/10:49 PM |
I don't know why, but I like this.P-e-rish *7*
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| Re: a comment on Suck by MacFrantic |
11-Jan-06/10:19 PM |
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that's my comment, sorry.
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| Re: Reckoning by <~> |
10-Jan-06/1:32 PM |
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Second stanza is particularly brilliant, as are the others. Remarkable. *10*
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| Re: a comment on Szaehling by MacFrantic |
9-Nov-05/8:44 PM |
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Nope, only a poet/jock/skeptic/actor I'm afraid.
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