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My Shattered Love (Free verse) by Silverjackel
A tempest, strong and violent
Is far less ferocious than she,
As the waves crash fiercely into the ship
And reflect voraciously;
Her lack of benign attributes
Would shatter it to pieces,
Crack and splinter the hardened oak
With vigor that is ceaseless;
Without remorse, regret, or shame,
The vessel would be lumber,
As her typhoon of arrogance
Would send the ship down under;
And never a cry out for repent
Would be uttered by she,
She would stick a dagger in your chest
And think it is amity;
This demon of remorselessness
Left me writhing on the ground,
Tore my heart to tiny bits
Then quickly turned around.
My love is but a dismal past,
Shattered by her malice;
The only prayer that I now speak
Is that she be damned to Satanâs palace.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10689
Posted: February 25, 2006 9:57 PM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2006 1:10 AM PST
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