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Today is very far away from a good day (Other) by Prince of Void
Today is very far away from a good day Wandering around with the sense of madness Keeping steps with melodies of raindrops Sinking in solitude of re-seized peace Feeling this is this Feeling familiar with scenes Scene after scene These scenes make me lost Making me incomplete verses An ocean of tears for a missing lover Making me finished in the sense The man goes to it The sense of leave-taking To where a good day’ll show up again Falling down into a puzzle of some idiots As the spiral patterns of galaxies open For grieving wander has taken a quest

Up the ladder: Helpless
Down the ladder: Slur

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10696
Posted: June 21, 2005 2:00 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2005 2:00 PM PDT
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[n/a] Dental Panic @ 84.31.86.195 | 21-Jun-05/2:42 PM | Reply
better go easy on the tears.
[8] Joshua_Tree @ 68.230.105.101 | 21-Jun-05/7:21 PM | Reply
Worth a 4. Giving you an 8 to balance out a certain putz who votes 0 for all poems posted by those who aren't among his chronies. Click on "view voting details" and taking whatever action you deem appropriate.
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