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Walking (Free verse) by Enkidu
He walked on He walked off It made little difference I walked for miles and miles For hours and hours While the sun raged overhead Walking proudly she Wondered And we wondered We walked and we Never got tired We always found A way to get where we were going Then a stranger crossed Us and we stopped Never to walk again For now we run

Up the ladder: The Bait
Down the ladder: The Fantasy

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10716
Posted: November 18, 2004 11:48 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2004 11:48 AM PST
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