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Today is very far away from a good day (Other) by Prince of Void

Today is very far away from a good day Wandering around with the sense of madness Keeping steps with melodies of raindrops Sinking in solitude of re-seized peace Feeling this is this Feeling familiar with scenes Scene after scene These scenes make me lost Making me incomplete verses An ocean of tears for a missing lover Making me finished in the sense The man goes to it The sense of leave-taking To where a good day’ll show up again Falling down into a puzzle of some idiots As the spiral patterns of galaxies open For grieving wander has taken a quest

Joshua_Tree 21-Jun-05/7:21 PM
Worth a 4. Giving you an 8 to balance out a certain putz who votes 0 for all poems posted by those who aren't among his chronies. Click on "view voting details" and taking whatever action you deem appropriate.




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