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Lie (Free verse) by Pervy Elf
Love is a deceiver for the unaware. It will rip open your heart without even a care. Do not trust it, For it will only bring you pain. Nothing good can ever come from this Emotion... Belief... Lie...

Up the ladder: thoughts
Down the ladder: No More Tomorrows

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10657
Posted: December 30, 2003 10:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 10:31 PM PST
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[9] sliver @ 63.190.80.47 | 31-Dec-03/7:43 AM | Reply
And still I search for it, I must be one of those fools they call human.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.228.141 | 31-Dec-03/12:31 PM | Reply
emotion is
belief
is lie.
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