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Lost In It (Free verse) by PoeticXTC
Surrounded at every end
No windows to breath
No doors to leave. Or
Is it that I don't want to
Living a life of despair and regret
The only way out is up.
Living a life for where there is no life
Everything in life is corrupt.
Is it just me, or is fate calling.
This life is no luck, it's a disgrace
Sit back to wonder what's to be dealt next
There is too little space misplaced.
In one's heart truths will be held.
Your truths, my truths, all truths are consealed
There is no space for disgrace
No time for regret
No need to despair
There is hope in a heart and love will prevail.
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Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10659
Posted: December 10, 2006 7:37 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2006 7:37 PM PST
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