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I hate you (Prose Poem) by Olivia22
I hate you witha passion I hate you with a tear, I hate the way you said you'll always be there. You said it to me lots of times, but never did you show it. How am I supposed to believe you when you went ahead and broke it? I wasted so many tears crying over you, I'm still cryin' now, and I dont know what to do. Tears on my pillow, tears on my tissue, Its hard to go about life and not even miss you. You done it once, You've done it twice to me, Im not a broken record, but to you I must be. I tried so hard to get you, I did not get an A I hate you now forever so you can just go away...

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10721
Posted: November 8, 2004 5:19 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2004 5:19 PM PST
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