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Wet Paint (A Blond Point of View) (Lyric) by Miggy Donât assume with my shiny red shoes
That I am hailed as a dating professional
My apologies that the plan handed you a loss
But I shall not take the fall
(Chorus)
Yet I will bring you to your hidden lusts
Your mistakes in the past was a matter of fate
The personality will be complemented with an added punch
After a touch of some wet paint
The fact you are crazy innocent
Was not the reason he wasnât attracted
But this new flare will give an added effect
For the ugliness comes from your fashion
(Chorus)
Your elegant sentences
Cannot be heard
From a bucket of blemishes
With yellow teeth
And nose like a birdâs
Not to mention the smelly feet
But donât you worry
After Iâm done you wonât be disappointed
(Chorus/Ending)
Up the ladder:
Staying Alive
Down the ladder:
No More Tomorrows
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Posted: March 2, 2006 7:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 2, 2006 7:08 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10726 Comments:
How do you bring her her hidden lusts. She already has them. Maybe you mean that you reveal them.
The last verse is good. The first verse and the chorus have potential, but need work. 212 view(s)
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'mistakes in the past was' (were)
I'm not so sure that I would care for this, in song format.