Slur

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Oct 2006 · 2 comments

There's something in me Wild and broken Some will see And I will be devastation Completely fulfilling All words concerning The deliberate The unintentional And the fated There's something with me Wherever I run Everything around me grows Inky fans blow And wide streaks Of disappointment Disfigure my mantle Here I can show Nothingness and everything As one

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[4] Dovina 20-Oct-06/3:42 PM Reply

Nothingness and everything? Have at it.

[7] half.italian 24-Oct-06/12:41 AM Reply

I like it. It reads well. The one thing I would do: change 'devastation' to 'devastated' or something else entirely.